Hiyas, e’erbody. I’m looking for critiques of this art for a joystick that I’m putting together. It looks okay (despite the background looking like I’m trying too hard), but there’s no real “pop” to it. It’s just there. So, any comments that betters this is greatly appreciated.
This is the current state after trying for hours to get more characters involved, using scale manipulation in an attempt to fake a sense of perspective.