I did this for a friend. I thought I’d post it hear before I decided to finalize it to see if I could get sum advice. In case the attachment comes out crappy as always…

Your structure isn’t bad! I would recommend experimenting with ways to make the sense of depth more obvious because at this point the picture is pretty flat. A very easy and always successful way to create depth is to make things in the foreground vastly different in value from the background. Using cool colors ( blue or other light colors ) for the background and warm ( red, yellow, orange ) in the front helps a lot too. Saturation can even help increase depth. Keep practicing, something good will come of it.

Thanks for the advice gammon. I understand what you mean about the depth problem. I’ve had a bit of trouble with that in the past too.