Hey thanks for the crit, appreciate it The nipples show and are a bit pointy because originally this was meant for ecchi collectors, but for those who don’t like that the clothes actually come with paddings. The eyes are fine, I made sure they align correctly with the edge of the nostrils as basic face anatomy requires. I guess in some pics they do look far apart because of her bangs going tangent with one of her eyes and giving off an illusion. I did’t follow the 3D model exactly for both Ibuki and Juri because they incorrect proportions.
As for Juri, this is a WIP and so I didn’t correct the keystone distortion from the camera, hence the long head. Also her bangs aren’t finished and secured yet and is still floating a bit high because of the switch underneath so it adds to the illusion that her face is Sarah Jessica Parker-ish. That’s also not a spinal curve, you won’t be able to see the spinal curve in this pic given the angle of the shot. That’s her latissimus dorsi to her obliques and the curve near her armpits are part of her shoulder blades. As for the forearm length, it’s hard to see correct arm lengths at this shot because they’re foreshortened. I’ll post better pics soon
Oh btw, I’m not “western”