Latest OC piece, I've Done

This are all my characters from the top going clockwise

-Ale, The “Jasper King”, of upcoming webcomic “Photon Story”
-Nally Dhuron, of upcoming webcomic “AutoS0ul”
-“Gaijin”, of my new webcomic “Rebel Gaijin”, Written By Zoob, and Illustrated by me All works are indeed copy-written

Any words of correction or critique? I want to improve my style for the nxt picture I will do.

-Mircon pen
-ballpoint pen