Monster Fighter Sequentials


#1

**These are for a competition, so I’d appreciate some feedback. I’m working on the fourth page right now, but I decided to put these up so I don’t miss the deadline. :slight_smile:

C+C welcome as always!

Page one:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/6521718/

Page two:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/6521783/

Page three:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6526787/ **


#2

Sweet Begeezuz and Mary!!! Your detail is AWESOME!!! :smiley:


#3

hanzou-great stuff…

good work Hanzou… i like the detail you have excellent skills…

just care to watch for the consistiencies of faces, one of your characters …her mouth looks a bit off on the second page :confused:…almost too far forward-


#4

I like how you draw the girl on the 3rd page. Very noice.:smiley:


#5

hanzou-great stuff…

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God Ryo- Thanks for the kind words man.

Gunstar-Yeah I noticed that issue with her mouth as well. I’m just going to leave it as is though. Save it as a reminder for next time. I am however working on fixing the figure in the last panel of page 2. She’s just too short, and it really bugs the hell out of me. I already have it all drawn out, and it looks better already. I’ll be reposting it tomorrow.

Twelve- Thanks, I like her too. :)**


#6

Excellent work.


#7

Here’s the revision;

http://69.26.135.131/images/cp/0009873-0019086.jpg


#8

KILL BILL IN 3 DAYS!!!

Perfection.:o You have truly mastered your style. :slight_smile: bows in reverence:lol:


#9

**This is my final page for the moster fighter contest over at Digital Webbing.

http://69.26.135.131/images/cp/0009873-0019119.jpg

Let me know what you guys think.

Oh, and thanks for the C+C so far, its been great. :slight_smile:
**


#10

These are good man. Give me a character mock-up type thing to color test.


#11

A whassat what?:confused: