Preparing the Hayate


#1

Hi everyone. Just wanted to create a Makoto illustration. Hope you enjoy it! :sweat:


#2

Aw sweet man

I love Makoto work


#3

i feel bad for critisising (sp?) because i couldnt do better but her arm looks broken/disjointed.


#4

…yeah, you should’ve had her arm bend the other way for it to look natural. Sorry dude.


#5

Nah, don’t apologize. I appreciate the feedback and will try to do better next time!


#6

Comments on the arm aside I do really like the job you did on her hands. You got potential so keep it up!